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Off topic: 唱歌吧......(Sing, Sing a Song...) Thread poster: Wenjer Leuschel (X)
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这首歌很好听,但是歌词不容易翻译。大家各显身手,把它译为中文如何?我回头有空琢磨一下。 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mbJ3vacGOhw "Lanterns" Lately I've found When I start to think aloud There's a longing in the sound There is more I could be In darkness I leave For a p... See more 这首歌很好听,但是歌词不容易翻译。大家各显身手,把它译为中文如何?我回头有空琢磨一下。 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mbJ3vacGOhw "Lanterns" Lately I've found When I start to think aloud There's a longing in the sound There is more I could be In darkness I leave For a place I've never seen It's been calling out to me That is where I should be We never carried days on our own But now it's up to us to know The weight of being so much more We will find ourselves on the road On we march With a midnight song We will light our way With our lanterns on On we march Till we meet the dawn We will light our way With our lanterns on As we walk out Without question, without doubt In the light that we have found It is finally clear Our day has come And we'll stand for who we are We are ready, we are young We have nothing to fear We never carried days on our own But now it's up to us to know The weight of being so much more We will find ourselves on the road On we march With a midnight song We will light our way With our lanterns on On we march Till we meet the dawn We will light our way With our lanterns on We held the light To our faces And realised We were chasing Shadows behind Not worth saving So burn it bright Forever illuminating On we march With a midnight song We will light our way With our lanterns on On we march Till we meet the dawn We will light our way With our lanterns on [x2] In darkness I leave For a place I've never seen It's been calling out to me That is where I should be ▲ Collapse | | |
pkchan United States Local time: 17:50 Member (2006) English to Chinese + ... Up on the Roof | Jun 21, 2014 |
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Jinhang Wang China Local time: 05:50 English to Chinese + ...
Li He, 这的确是一首好歌,我非常喜欢歌词。如果不演唱,而是朗诵的话,它会是一首非常好的诗,蕴含哲理,激人奋进。下面我尝试把它译成中文,其中的确有难翻译的地方,比如:The weight of being so much more 中的 being so much more 就很难准确地翻译。另外,We never carried days on our own 中的 carried days 是什么意思? 灯 最近我发觉 当我开始自言自语时 声音中有一种渴望 我可以做别样的人 我在黑夜中离去 要到一个从未见过的地方 它一直在召唤我 那儿是我应在的地方 我们从未独自过日子 但是现在该我们知道 做别样的人的分量 我们将在路上发现我们自己 我们勇往直前 唱着夜半歌声 我们用点亮的灯 照亮我们的道路 我们勇往直前 直到迎来黎明 我们用点亮的灯 照亮我们的道路 当我们在我们发现的光明中 毫不犹疑、义无反顾地 出走的时候 最终显然 我们的日子已经来到了 我们将代表我们自己 我们已准备好了,我们还年轻 我们无所畏惧 我们从未独自过日子 但是现在该我们知道 做别样的人的分量的时候了 我们将在路上发现我们自己 我们勇往直前 唱着夜半歌声 我们用点亮的灯 照亮我们的道路 我们勇往直前 直到迎来黎明 我们用点亮的灯 照亮我们的道路 我们让灯光 靠近我们的脸 就会意识到 我们是在追逐 背后的影子 既然不值得节省 就让它燃烧得明亮些 永远光辉照耀 我们勇往直前 唱着夜半歌声 我们用着点亮的灯 照亮我们的道路 我们勇往直前 直到迎来黎明 我们用点亮的灯 照亮我们的道路 我在黑夜中离去 要到一个从未见过的地方 它一直在召唤我 那儿是我应在的地方 不妥之处,欢迎各位同仁不吝赐教,以便修正完善。最后,我会根据大家的意见,给出修订版。
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wherestip United States Local time: 16:50 Chinese to English + ...
J.H., 我一直觉得 你中文文笔很不错, 这诗歌的译文更是不例外。 大致看了一下, 我认为基本理解都是对的。 下面这段在分句上有些问题: And realised We were chasing Shadows behind Not worth saving So burn it bright Forever illuminating 分句应是: And realized we were chasing shadows behind not worth saving; so burn it bright, forever illuminating. 我想歌词中这样用大概是有双重意思,一个就是通常指的 实际上不存在、不可获得的,另一个就是我们在追逐已逝去的不值得留恋的时光 (memories not worth saving)。 In the context, I think the meaning leans more towards the latter though. ~*~*~*~*~* 承担责任、承担使命 In the past, it's been mostly the baby boomer generation that's been carrying the day. Now the next generation needs to do their part on their own. | | |
David Lin United Kingdom Local time: 22:50 Member (2013) English to Chinese + ... Moderator of this forum
J.H. Wang wrote: Li He, 这的确是一首好歌,我非常喜欢歌词。如果不演唱,而是朗诵的话,它会是一首非常好的诗,蕴含哲理,激人奋进。下面我尝试把它译成中文,其中的确有难翻译的地方,比如:The weight of being so much more 中的 being so much more 就很难准确地翻译。另外,We never carried days on our own 中的 carried days 是什么意思? 灯 最近我发觉 当我开始自言自语时 声音中有一种渴望 我可以做别样的人 我在黑夜中离去 要到一个从未见过的地方 它一直在召唤我 那儿是我应在的地方 我们从未独自过日子 但是现在该我们知道 做别样的人的分量 我们将在路上发现我们自己 我们勇往直前 唱着夜半歌声 我们用点亮的灯 照亮我们的道路 我们勇往直前 直到迎来黎明 我们用点亮的灯 照亮我们的道路 。。。。 不妥之处,欢迎各位同仁不吝赐教,以便修正完善。最后,我会根据大家的意见,给出修订版。 [Edited at 2014-06-23 10:43 GMT] 录像链结描述年青人为某些关注的问题在路上游行抗议,想引起公众注意,里面有防暴警察用防暴犬来对付示威者。所以好像不是有关年轻人个人归属感的问题。 "carry days" 应该来自 “carry the day" = victorious,successful = 赢得他人赞同,达致成功、胜利。 ”weight" 应该是 “责任” being "so much more" = 有多大(的责任) 这样理解会容易一点。 我们从未独自赢得胜利 但是现在该知道 我们的责任有多大 我们将在路上发现自己 意喻参与游行抗议的人必须团结一致,在参与游行 (road) 过程中除了更了解自己之外,也会晓得责任重大。这段歌词重覆几次,其中有鼓励作用。 歌名 lantern 有基督教信仰意味,因为圣经中提到人在世上需作盐、作光。后者有作世上明灯,在黑暗中具照明作用,指出错误,寻找正途之意。 | | |
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