Glossary entry (derived from question below)
French term or phrase:
permettants d'analyser les incidents
English translation:
making it possible to analyse incidents/enabling incident analysis
French term
permettants d'analyser les incidents
Nov 7, 2008 11:27: Enza Longo Created KOG entry
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Proposed translations
making it possible to analyse incidents
other possibilities:
enabling incident analysis and the implementation of corrective actions
making it possible to perform incident analysis and implement corrective actions
France
Your thoughts exactly.
Native in: French 
, English
Works in: French to English, English to French, Dutch to French, and 3 more.
which allow to analyze incidents
alternate translations include: "allowing to analyze incidents" and "enabling to analyze incidents".
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Jennifer Levey
: neither 'allow(ing)' nor 'enabling' is followed directly by the infinitive verb in native UK English.
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Martin Cassell
: sorry, but it is just not idiomatic English to use this construction, in the active voice without an object: it needs to be e.g. "enabling incidents to be analysed" or "enabling [someone] to analyse incidents"
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that lets you analyze incidents and take corrective action
making it possible to investigate issues
incidents, issues, bugs, cases, tickets...
on which incidents can be analysed
for analyzing incidents
In many cases "permettre" can be left out of the English version.
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Emma Paulay
: Or even "incident analysis/investigation and resolution/correction". It can be so much shorter in English!
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