Glossary entry

français term or phrase:

Aucune remarque n\'a été ouverte

anglais translation:

No comment has been opened

Added to glossary by claude-andrew
Aug 17, 2011 13:35
12 yrs ago
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français term

Aucune remarque n'a été ouverte

français vers anglais Autre Entreprise / commerce Quality management audit
This is puzzling me. It is a paragraph in the results of an audit on quality management (design and manufacture of a mobile phone).

Remarques
La réponse apportée à l'exigence n'est pas satisfaisante car elle ne couvre pas certains risques.
**Aucune remarque n'a été ouverte.**

Non-conformités
Il s'agit des écarts par rapport à des exigences fondamentales qui remttent en cause la confiance dans les résultats des activités.
Aucune non conformité n'a été constateé.
Change log

Aug 17, 2011 15:59: philgoddard changed "Field" from "Technique / Génie" to "Autre" , "Field (specific)" from "Électronique / génie électronique" to "Entreprise / commerce"

Discussion

claude-andrew (asker) Aug 18, 2011:
Client's response "Aucune remarque n'a été ouverte". Suite aux essais réalisés, si une anomalie est constatée, une fiche est ouverte. Dans ce cas, la réponse donnée par xxxxxxx ne correspond pas aux attentes de la société de Certification, mais cela n'a pas engendré une ouverture de fiche.
claude-andrew (asker) Aug 17, 2011:
@Phil I agree. Anyway I sent the question to the client this afternoon, I'll keep you posted on the answer.
philgoddard Aug 17, 2011:
I think the use of "ouverte" is important - it means something along the lines of "raised a formal comment which the person being audited was required to respond to".
claude-andrew (asker) Aug 17, 2011:
Thanks to all for opening your comments on my question ;-) - I'm going to offer the client "No further comments were made" and see what he says. (I'm submitting this afternoon).
It's slightly reassuring to find that colleagues are unsure too.
Claire Nolan Aug 17, 2011:
Examples of ''ouvrir une remarque'': http://www.cmh.acsdm2.ens.fr/documents/PATRIMOINE/lil-0079cc...

page 17: 5. Autre raison (ouvrir une remarque)

AND HERE, also:

Problème avec la fonction de remarques du navigateur de plans

La commande du menu contextuel permettant de créer et d’OUVRIR DES REMARQUES dans la colonne Notes dans le navigateur de plans « Shots Browser » (pièce Setup, c’est-à-dire Configuration) ne fonctionne pas correctement.

http://www.apple.com/support/releasenotes/fr/Color_1.0_rn/
Ce problème a été corrigé dans Color 1.0.2.

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Hi Claude-Andrew,
I'm presuming that within the procedure, there is such a thing as "ouvrir une remarque", either by filling out comments in a "remarques" document or by filling out a dedicated field in a database.
It's about the only sense I can make of this sentence.
In the next paragraph, it says that no incidence of non-compliance had been found but it's interesting that they don't use the same turn of phrase here.
You would expect "Aucune non conformité n'a été ouverte" wouldn't you?
It still wouldn't make sense but at least it would be consistent!
Note from asker:
Yes, that's precisely why I included the second paragraph, to show the apparent inconsistency of expression. The use of "ouvrir" does seem to imply the eventuality of the original comment being taken up by the audited company - as suggested by Mimi here.
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thanks - on the basis of the client's own reply (to the effect that the company has the right to open a cmments file on the matter), yours is the most accurate answer here."
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no proposal/remark was made

a wild guess!

Maybe after the unsatisfactory response, no other remark was made
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agree kashew : offerte
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agree Alistair Ian Spearing Ortiz
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the subject was not breached OR no input was given/given OR no issue was raised

just providing alternative possibilities

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Note added at 1 hr (2011-08-17 15:08:36 GMT)
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sorry, the second suggestion should say: no opinion/input was made/given

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Note added at 1 hr (2011-08-17 15:09:19 GMT)
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ALSO: no further comment/issue was raised/made/given/added
Note from asker:
Thanks. This goes along with the general opinion.
Peer comment(s):

neutral philgoddard : I agree with your third suggestion - it means it was formally queried.
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no statement of opinion given

or this
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